Sometimes you commit to writing about something, then find yourself stuck. A double poem today — two versions of the same, to be exact — to make up for missing the last two weeks.
Wonderful. I really like to see the development of thought in the two different version. I do prefer the second one, but I can aso see a third one emerging from it. It's like you are working towards a short poem, like a haiku, trying to capture the essence of it all.
Thank you for the feedback, Arjun. Given time, poems do all get shorter. I'm glad you mentioned haikus; poetry in pictographic script is fascinating because of how much meaning you can retain even after a protracted shearing.
Wonderful. I really like to see the development of thought in the two different version. I do prefer the second one, but I can aso see a third one emerging from it. It's like you are working towards a short poem, like a haiku, trying to capture the essence of it all.
Thank you for the feedback, Arjun. Given time, poems do all get shorter. I'm glad you mentioned haikus; poetry in pictographic script is fascinating because of how much meaning you can retain even after a protracted shearing.